Thursday, October 8, 2009

Doodling


This little ditty is what I'm sending over to Peter (that's peterdewolf.wordpress.com) for doodlepalooza:


It's gotten awkward
again

cause she
doesn't know
what to say
and he
doesn't know
what he did
or if it was him

or if she'd even

upset
which is

of course

what's bothering her
in
the first place

but he doesn't notice
and she doesn't try

so no one's
actually
happy

but neither of them
will ever
stop
instead they play
this game

cat and mouse

but that's not quite right
it's more like
Tyrannosaurus Rex and Stegosaurus
cause there's
nothing

cute and fluffy
when they fight
like
this but
just for tonight

she'll take a deep
breath before she

shuffles to his
side of the couch
and
she'll rest her head
on his shoulder
and he'll
wrap an arm
around her
til
she slides onto his chest

he'll say something
which she can't
catch but she'll feel
the rumbling in his
lungs
and that'll
make her
giggle until he asks
what's so funny
and then she'll kiss him
and
they'll remember
to fight

tomorrow
maybe

3 comments:

  1. Hi there!

    Peter let me in on the news that you started a blog- congrats, they are a lot of fun. As for your word doodle, I absolutely adore it. It fits a situation I'm in perfectly.

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  2. Yup. brandy's right. It's a good 'un.

    Glad you submitted.

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  3. Hey! Welcome to blogging! (or, in my case, welcome to the land of posts that no one reads... yet...)

    Love your writing! Keep it up!

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