Thursday, October 8, 2009
Doodling
This little ditty is what I'm sending over to Peter (that's peterdewolf.wordpress.com) for doodlepalooza:
It's gotten awkward
again
cause she
doesn't know what to say
and he
doesn't know what he did
or if it was him
or if she'd even
upset
which is
of course
what's bothering her in
the first place
but he doesn't notice
and she doesn't try
so no one's actually
happy
but neither of them
will ever
stop
instead they play
this game
cat and mouse
but that's not quite right
it's more like
Tyrannosaurus Rex and Stegosaurus
cause there's
nothing
cute and fluffy
when they fight
like this but
just for tonight
she'll take a deep
breath before she
shuffles to his
side of the couch and
she'll rest her head
on his shoulder and he'll
wrap an arm
around her til
she slides onto his chest
he'll say something
which she can't
catch but she'll feel
the rumbling in his
lungs and that'll
make her
giggle until he asks
what's so funny
and then she'll kiss him
and they'll remember
to fight
tomorrow
maybe
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Hi there!
ReplyDeletePeter let me in on the news that you started a blog- congrats, they are a lot of fun. As for your word doodle, I absolutely adore it. It fits a situation I'm in perfectly.
Yup. brandy's right. It's a good 'un.
ReplyDeleteGlad you submitted.
Hey! Welcome to blogging! (or, in my case, welcome to the land of posts that no one reads... yet...)
ReplyDeleteLove your writing! Keep it up!